To Strike and not be Struck

Design \ Poster/ad | 12/03/04 @833 | PlumBlossom | critiques (2) | views (378)

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....Poster done for a college fencing team....My 4th commisioned ad design...the piece gets presented to them tomorrow..so any suggestions would be welcome.

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windandfire

12/03/04 @902

I love this!!! Great work. Only suggestions I might have:
-Since we read from the left to the right, I'd suggest placing the square on the upper right hand (when & where) to the upper left corner. I might also place it slightly higher to align with the "T" (just a thought, I'm not exactly sure if it would look better).
-I would place the other square ("Access to all. . ."

where you had the other square (upper right hand). I'd change the square to resemble the other one by having sharp corners, changing the font, etc. . .
-I'd center "USM" and all that goes with it underneath, on the bottom.
But I love it how it is.......and these are only some ideas that you could possibly fool around with.
Great idea, layout, presentation!

windandfire

12/03/04 @903

Oh, by the way, thanks for your comment and letting me know about OpenCanvas.......I'm definitely going to check it out. Thanks!!!!

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